I like it. It's not overstated. I hate all those things with gorillas and pitbulls on, or logos implying that the wearer is some sort of mad-dog badass.
I can see what OR is getting at, but I wouldn't know how to alter it to address that.
Lifetime best: 500/363/573 @ 220 belt only
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