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Old 11-23-2009, 07:10 PM   #1
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WHO AM I? I am not a huge bodybuilder.* Iím not one of those guys you see benching 300 lbs like itís nothing.* I havenít been lifting for 20 years (Iím not even 20 years old).* So who am I, and why the hell am I writing an article telling you what to do to gain [...]

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Old 11-23-2009, 07:21 PM   #2
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This article is by Kman from the forum. Great job BigK!

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Very good work. Turn it in for extra credit in your English class.
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Old 11-23-2009, 07:36 PM   #4
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Very good work. Turn it in for extra credit in your English class.
This young guys now their grammar better then I did at that age.
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Old 11-23-2009, 09:22 PM   #5
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Very good work. Turn it in for extra credit in your English class.
me and my english teacher have a "love- hate relationship". next time she gives me a shitty grade on a paper, i will bring this up.

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Its easier to write things i'm interested in. My english papers suck if i dont have an interest in the topic.
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Old 11-23-2009, 11:38 PM   #6
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me and my english teacher have a "love- hate relationship". next time she gives me a shitty grade on a paper, i will bring this up.

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Its easier to write things i'm interested in. My english papers suck if i dont have an interest in the topic.
cheater! lol good job bro, its cool to see you out there doing your thing, and trying to help others with what you've learned
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Its easier to write things i'm interested in. My english papers suck if i dont have an interest in the topic.
Your a published writer. Throw that in her face. It generally is easier to write about those things that interest us. You'll find that most writers do write about subjects that they like.
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Don't worry about teachers. Keep writing. I hated English when I was in school, primarily because I never had solid teachers. With writing, you tend to pick up proper grammar as you learn self editing. You also learn to be concise.

With writing, it's never about the actual writing itself anyway...it's always about letting the ideas out of your head. Keep doing that, or your brain will explode.
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Grammar was not too bad. I caught several errors, but I'm a Nazi and scored the highest on my ACT's and GMAT in English and Reading Comprehension. The errors were also pretty minor. You should be able to correct them easily with more experience.

I did giggle at the 150 POUNDS of protein/day though. lol

The one and only thing to caution on is telling people to drink large amounts of milk. I know it's hard to make general statements for the whole population (I've done on my site before too), but there are tons and tons and tons of people that are lactose intolerant. You're going to have a lot of bloated, gassy, unhappy people walking around.

Oh wait, that's how I always walk around.

Nice article, man. Keep it up. I really liked the "Badass" section.
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