Other than your self critique there Mike, I couldn't really see anything wrong with your pulls. If i had to nitpick, I could say you are taking a bit too long to pull it, as the Crew taught me to lower and rip it off the floor asap. I found in order to do this, I needed confidence in my hip position. The reason they told me this is that they thought I was thinking too much before pulling it, which was having a negative impact. I'd say I have to agree with them, as not fussing while setting up did help me.
I had to chuckle a bit with the frame carry vids. First, I see nothing, and then you racing across the field of view, and then you disappear, and then I hear a woohooo!
Do you live out in the woods or something?