I like it. It's not overstated. I hate all those things with gorillas and pitbulls on, or logos implying that the wearer is some sort of mad-dog badass.
I can see what OR is getting at, but I wouldn't know how to alter it to address that.
230 strict press @ 220; bodyweight+187 X 4 dips @ 180; 403 front squat @ 210; 10 000 push-ups.
Ignoring irrelevant credentials since I was 17.